Friday, February 13, 2009

Update on FH&S

Since what I have posted previously is a rough draft I will be making changes periodically and adding details/dialogue. When I do this I will do it in GREEN so you can see the adjustments that have been made. I hope you enjoy the story...I will have another installment for you Saturday.
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2009 at 12:15 AM

    “Jasmine, how did you get a secret admirer?" - I'm not sure I like that line - with the emphasis on 'You' it makes it seem shocking that Jasmine could ever get a secret admirer - what's wrong with Jasmine that you are so surprised at this?

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